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PostSubject: Jack and Amelia Bern [Jack]   Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:41 am

Name: Jack Bern

Age: 15 and a half

Homecountry: He's half Avaressian, half Siegeril but born in the Bahamut Empire.

Gender:Male

Height: 146cm

Build:Thin with some muscle

Class:Archer

Level: 1 (exp: 28/100)

Weapons: Makeshift Bow (if allowed, otherwise Composite Bow)

Weapon Rank: Vir 0/3

Summary: Jack is a rather quiet child. Everyone thinks this is because he is shy, but he isn't. He has severe brain damage, and he will almost always trail off on a sentence, leaving his adopted sister, Amelia to finish them.

Appearance:Jack is small for his age, but his face is quite masculine. He has cloudy gray eyes, and messy black hair that stops at the baseline of his neck. He usually wears a cloak made from fine fabrics and he is always seen with his bow.

Bio:Jack was born on the third of February in the Bahamut Empire, where his mother and father were taken hostage by bandits. His mother had died in birth, his father shortly after from an unknown disease. He was two months old when that had happened. When he was four months, a rich family with a background of hunting and magic had took him in, and named him Jack. As he grew older, he quickly grew fond of Amelia, and they became close. He was hunting on a wintery Tuesday when he was twelve, when he slipped and bashed his head on a tree trunk. He had gotten severe brain damage from that. Now he is living in the Bahamut Empire, hunting to make profit, and hoping one day to take down a mighty beast.

Additional Notes/Comments:Jack isn't actually just Avarres. His father was Siegeril, making Jack someone from the Avarres-Siegeril race.

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Name: Amelia Bern

Age: 17

Homecountry:Bahamut Empire

Gender:Female

Height: 176 cm

Build:Slim with no muscle.

Class:Priest

Level: 1 (exp: 28/100)

Weapons: Shine and Corona

Weapon Rank:Vir 0/3

Summary: Amelia is very kind, and helpful. She won't turn down someone in need, and is very sweet. She loves to sing alot, and people have said her voice is angelic, and her face is like a cherub's. She dpesn't think of herself as these things though.

Appearance:Amelia is a typical seventeen year old girl, with a sinewy body. Her hair is long, and wavy. Her hair colour is white. Her eyes are a sea blue, and her face is round and soft. She wears the typical (final fantasy) white mage robes, but also wears a star pendant from an oooollllddd friend who she sorely misses.

Bio:Amelia was born into a rich family, renowned for their skills in hunting and magic. She was home school up until she was fourteen. When she started public school, she met Dillan, who she fell for. Hard. Dillan had come up to her one day, flirting with her. Amelia had always thought of this as a good sign, and one day Dillan had asked her out on a date. She had said yes. When Dillan was sixteen, he left to join the Bahamut Empire army, but left a star pendant with Amelia. Amelia never heard of him again...

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PostSubject: Re: Jack and Amelia Bern [Jack]   Sat Sep 17, 2011 3:09 pm

It would've been better if you had made two different topics for each character, but meh. I'll start the grading process.

Jack - Makeshift Bow doesn't exist in the Bow Ranks so Jack gets the Composite Bow instead.

Grading: 4/5

Amelia - Everything seems fine.

Grading: 4/5

Grader's Thoughts: I found this duo rather interesting. I actually thank God that there was nothing about the younger brother falling in love with his sister, otherwise that would've been clichè. But anyways, I'm looking forward towards you RPing :)

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PostSubject: Re: Jack and Amelia Bern [Jack]   Sat Sep 17, 2011 3:16 pm

Thanks man :3

Lol I didn't even want them falling in love anyway.
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PostSubject: Re: Jack and Amelia Bern [Jack]   Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:38 pm

Makeshift Bow is allowed as long as it's basically a Composite Bow. Generally, you can name your own weapon. Which I don't usually do but meh, I was planning to grade this but I seem to be late. I agree with Basil, this is interesting rather.

As for me, you should start out by joining events, there's currently one recruiting people. Since Notte isn't that much of an active member now, I claim the position to organize it. Here's the link.

I look forward to roleplaying with you, and in case you don't know about soloing, I prefer you read the Roleplay Rules, thanks.

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