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NotteEterna
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PostSubject: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:04 am



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This story is one I was told on my travels through the dimensions. It is one I am sure you will enjoy. Be warned though, it gets quite graphic and contains profanity. (though i say i was "told" it, this is indeed mine, it is simply for role-play purposes.)

[This story is still in its process of being "retold" (written) so do bear with me on that. Also if you have any questions regarding the story post them here, or if you think they could spoil the story for others and you absolutely must know, mail them to me. I will always reply to my fan mail and questions, but i may not answer them how you want. (i may be unwilling to reveal certain plot points as I do not want the story ruined for you, or worse, my idea taken)]

Without further delay, here is our story:

Prologue: The Final Rite
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Chapter I: Uncontrolled Power
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Chapter II: A Home Long Since Lost
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Chapter III: The Forest Ruins
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Chapter IV: The White Room
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Last edited by NotteEterna on Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:30 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Chapter IV ^.^)
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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:03 pm

O_O; The second chapter is full of blood when I try to picture the scene. It's so intense .. Keep those chapters popping! I'm entertained with these, lolol.

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Mon Jun 27, 2011 2:46 pm

I am glad you are enjoying them madam. I will be sure to continue them until the story reaches its end.

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Tue Jun 28, 2011 12:51 am

That is one heck of a story Etern. I really enjoyed it! A well defined setting can be seen, from the fights to the environment, every thing has been defined in detail. And that's what makes you a story teller. I am waiting for chapter 3 now :3
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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:16 am

Why thank you Basil, that is very much appreciated as a writer and inspires this story to be told along with many more.

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:48 am

This is an awesome story!!!! 1000 points!!!! lol
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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:21 am

why thank you Rydia, I mean Rosa. More will come soon.

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 07, 2011 6:42 am

Chapter 3 is now up. :)

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:00 am

This is the worse thing I have ever read...



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Jk lol But seriously, I loved the episode, but it was too short man D: Still, kudos~

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:08 am

I have added a little bit to the chapter, but it is all i can add for I want the next chapter separate.

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:27 am

Read it, and still loved it ♥ I love Shichi's personality XD

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:34 pm

Chapter 3 is so mean. It was like the climax for me but yet unfortunate pops in! 3:<

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Fri Jul 08, 2011 1:32 am

Its an awesome addition to the rest of the story! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Wed Jul 13, 2011 12:22 am

Chapter four is up ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Wed Jul 13, 2011 3:58 am

Not like Crimson eyes but good too! I ike it very MUCH :cheers:
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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:56 pm

I guess thats...a compliment?

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:34 am

I would take it as one! Good job on another great additon to your story!
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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:35 am

Very well, A compliment it is ^.^ and thank you Rosa, as always. XD

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:47 am

That's an effin' awesome logo Notte!! It looks just awesome~

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:46 pm

I'll be sure to relay the message to RG, unless you do first that is. (I know right? I was like O.O )

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Fri Jul 15, 2011 6:29 am

I think it'd be a good idea if you told him that yourself ^.^

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:35 pm

I already have told him that I think that >.>

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Sat Jul 16, 2011 5:20 am

Oohhh.. then I should tell him too :3 Also, I think I should ask him to join the Cafè too... but this isn't about recruitment. Anyways, loving Memoria so far, hoping that Episode 5 is released real soon.

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Sun Jul 24, 2011 9:51 pm

Woot! Memoria is in the top-viewed topics! XD

That said, I feel inspired and hope to have the next chapter up real soon.

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PostSubject: Re: Memoria Di Morte [story]   Mon Jul 25, 2011 4:56 am

You'd better write the next topic fast >w> Or else I'll beat the living carp out of you.

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