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How do you like Gray?
He is so awsome!!!
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Pretty scary guy.
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I hate him, I want to kill him!
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Reasonable.
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Who's Gray???
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PostSubject: Gray Hiraga   Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:44 pm

Name:Gray Hiraga or just Gray

Age: 17 years old

Homecountry: The Bahamut Empire

Gender: Male

Height: 5ft 11in

Build: Normal

Class: Hunter

Level: 1 (Exp: 0/100)

Weapons: Knife

Weapon Rank: Vir 0/3

Summary: Gray is pretty much dark character. You can say heartless. But he can be careing sometimes. He would not kill without reason. When help is needed he would help. But he wont open to you so easy. Only few had heard his story, story of his heart. That sadness he passed in his life. Betrayel he felt... If you ever hear his full story, you would wish that you never heard it, and if you tell it without his knowlage, That will be your last story....

Appearance: Gray has flame red hair and red blood eyes. Flame idicates burn down of his village and blood eyes, blood he has saw. He has scars on his body, one on his cheek, one on his back and front(in past sword has passed trough him, thats why there are scars). His skin is normal white skin. His hair is short and he covers it with robe that he wers alot, his robe is magical and he can store many stuff in there includin his knifes.

Bio: Gray was borned in Bahamut Empire, close to the border. He is dark character who's family was killed in a massacre(whole village was killed), he was one of few whom survived. He learned about life in a hard way. In age of 14 he joins assassin's. He killed without hessitations, some called him heartless. In age of 16 he leaves assassin's and goes around the world in search of adventure. Now he is treasure hunter, but he still assassinate targets for good money.


Additional Notes/Comments: This is not whole story as you know he will tell you stories as he earns your trust ;)

Current RPs: Into The Deadlands

Completed RPs: None


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PostSubject: Re: Gray Hiraga   Sat Jul 02, 2011 6:00 pm

would you by chance mean Avarres?
the height translates to about 5ft 11in so you are good there.
the appearance could use some more detail, like: skin colour/shade, hair style/length, and clothing.

make those corrections and youre good :D havnt decided if those corrections will make it a 4/5 or 5/5 yet, but regardless it will be passed.

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PostSubject: Re: Gray Hiraga   Sun Jul 03, 2011 1:10 am

this is awesome, shana-chan!! lol XD
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PostSubject: Re: Gray Hiraga   Sun Jul 03, 2011 2:52 am

Approved
But it'd be much more explanatory if you told in which Key-Zone the massacre happened, plus I don't think there's a village in the Key Zone list of the Bahamut Empire, is there? Nevertheless, I give it a 3/5.
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PostSubject: Re: Gray Hiraga   Sun Jul 03, 2011 3:36 am

Basil, the village waas destroyed anyway so it doesnt matter. As he said approved, but the area of the rmpire would be nice like northern or southern.
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