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PostSubject: Zack Fimbeltr   Zack Fimbeltr I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 02, 2011 4:07 pm

Name: Zack Fimbeltr

Age: 16

Homecountry: Zolfo

Gender: Male

Height: 6'2"

Build: Mesomorphic

Class: Marksman - Archer

Level: 1 (Exp: 34/100)

Weapons: Composite Bow

Weapon Rank: Vir

Summary: Zack is a carefree person who tends to not take stuff seriously and put everything as a joke, but when he tends to get
serious, he can't be stopped from doing what he wants to. Stubborn, he'll do anything once he's decided to do it. He was and is still loved by many of his old friends from Zolfo. Zack thinks that life is short, so it's better to enjoy everything rather than doing it with a serious and annoyed attitude. Zack tends to give importance to every acquaintance he makes and to every friend he has. He also has an animal friend, a phoenix named Omnus that he got from an egg from his Master. Omnus is not seen around with Zack, but however always answers his call.

Zack wears the same costume as the man in the pic but without the gauntlets and with his sleeves fold up. He wears finger-less black gloves and also wears long boots.

Bio: Zack was born in Zolfo, in the house of Fimbeltrs. He is the only child of the Fimbeltrs and is loved dearly by his parents. Zack was a little mischievous and had a habit of playing pranks on people when he was a kid. He would always be up to some mischief whenever he was roaming the streets. His parents were merchants, so they occasionally traveled from one city to another and always brought back something for Zack. Once they brought him a slingshot and Zack got pretty good with it soon because he practiced day
and night to perfect his shots. One day, his parents went to a city for trading goods, but they never returned. A rumor spread out that two merchants were killed ruthlessly by a group of bandits on their way to the city but those merchants weren't identified. Zack wouldn't believe the rumor because he thought that his parents were still alive, but when he waited for them long enough and when they didn't return, Zack had no other choice but to accept that rumor. With that, Zack had nowhere to go, that's when Jacques, a man known as the Master of Archery took him in to train him for his own protection. When Zack became 16 years old, with Jacques' permission. Zack left Zolfo in search of revenge for his parents, although he never lost his warming smile.

Additional Notes/Comments: Zack does what he feels is right. And once he gets angry at something, it's hard to control him.

Current RPs: Into The Deadlands
A Virtuous Undertaking

Completed RPs: None

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PostSubject: Re: Zack Fimbeltr   Zack Fimbeltr I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 02, 2011 4:20 pm

Grading Covered --

No problems I've saw in the Personality. Yet the Appearance needs more detailing. You need to specify the exact settings of where the killing actually happened. What key zone of Zolfo was Zack born in?

Nonetheless, I will give it a 4 over 5.

Grading Passed! Profile Accepted.
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