It would look more darn good if the Bahamut on the left wasn't blurred. Also, try using a smaller silhouette of a Bahamut behind the text or something. Like, how Jaeroll used to make the logos, yeah, his style! :3 Still, you've improved since last time, so nice.
Also, moved to Alfidis's Crayons, since this is something that cannot be used in RM Engines. -Basil