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 |  Subject: One Piece; Revolution  Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:50 pm | |
| I decided to start making a continuation of the One Piece story. It's basically set way in the future ( 30-40 Years? ) Where a... Well I'll just post the story, you'll understand. Characters : - Spoiler:
Name : Salamander D. Pyro
Age : 17
Job : Captain
Devil Fruit : Pyro Pyro no Mi
Crew : Flameveil Pirates
Bio : Salamander desceneds from a rich and wealthy family with the only
sign of piracy being his great uncle, Portgas D. Ace. The Mera Mera no Mi
respawned near an island while Salamander's Grandpa was fishing. He took it
and kept it. He told the whole family, if anyone wanted to be a pirate, to
consult with him. Everyone denied the request, as they hated piracy. Several
Years later Salamander was born and his grandpa taught him how to fight and
defend himself. When Salamander turned 17, his Grandpa was killed by pirates.
He went inside Grandpa's room to pack his stuff, when he saw the Devil Fruit.
When Salamander picked it up, it changed, and so did the aura. The Mera Mera
no Mi became the Pyro Pyro no Mi, an inhanced version of this famous Logia
class fruit. Salamander decided to become a pirate and have his own crew to
avenge the pirates who did this to his grandpa, the Vanguard Pirates, one,
if not, the strongest pirates in history.
Name : Lightning
Age : 17
Job : First-Mate; Swordsman
Devil Fruit : Jolt Jolt no Mi
Crew : Flameveil Pirates
Bio : Spark is a rather infamous swordsman who uses a very unique and rare
style called Denki-Senkou which focuses on Ungodly Speed attacks based on
electricity. He is undoubtfuly Salamander's best friend and only a bit weaker
than him. His two swords are made of a special stone called Denki-Seki which
conducts a huge amount of electricity.
Name : Tatsuo
Age : 15
Job : Pirate
Devil Fruit : Zuki Zuki no Mi
Crew : Skylance Pirates
Bio : Tatsuo was found in the sea, drowning and was saved by the Skylance Pirates. The pirate
crew took care of Tatsuo as if he were their own nakama but the captain was a bit strict to him.
After a series of events, Tatsuo accidently ate the Zuki Zuki no Mi that allowed him the power of
all three Devil Fruit classes at once. He has a happy personality but can get angry when something
wrong happens or he gets angry, he gets extremely powerful.
Name : Aura
Age : 17
Job : Gunner
Devil Fruit : Tama Tama no Mi
Crew : Flameveil Pirates
Bio : Aura is the Gunner of the Flameveil pirates. He used his Tama Tama no Mi powers to manipulate people's
souls and infuse his soul in bullets and shoot them for greater damage. Aura's battle skills mainly depend
on spiritual and mental attacks.
Chapter 1 : New Pirate enters the Grand Era! - Spoiler:
The waves smashed against the small ship of a new fellow pirate. He looks up to see whats the problem, the
island he's heading to doesn't get much waves. In the distance he could see a huge shape, gliding across
the water. As it came closer, the Pirate recognized it as a Sea King. A rather small one, too. He extrended
his hands as the Sea King neared closer. He put his head down, then prepared to speak silently. 'Pyro Pyro
no Mi...' The sea king jumped out of the water and was ready to slam the pirate. 'Flame Arrow.' The sea king
was propelled back as a huge bolt of fire pierced it's stomach and sent it flying into the ocean. The pirate
carefully docked his boat on the harbor and walked slowly through the market. Everyone stared at him, they
rarely get pirates thanks to the a Marine Prison that was implemented inside. A gun was placed on the pirates
head, and the owner of the gun cocked it. " So you're a pirate huh? What's your bounty? 50? " The pirate
glared at the man, and formed a gun with his flames. " Let's see who's gun shoots faster " replied the Pirate.
The man was frightend as he's never seen a Pirate make a gun out of flames. " It can't be... a Devil Fruit! "
The market made a sudden gasp and took a leave into the houses, shutting down everything. " Now tell me,
Bob, are you of explosions? " asked the Pirate. " N-No... not really... " replied the Man. " Aw, thats a shame
I just love it when they go...BOOM! " A flame in the shape of a bullet shot the man. " You're a pirate too,
you gotta love explosions. " The pirate took out a bounty from his pocket, the man's name was Big Dave.
The pirate laughed at his bounty of $250,000. " I'm about to break a friend out of Prison, but I feel as
glad as to give you my name. " said the Pirate. " My name, is Salamander D. Pyro. "
Chapter 2 : Prison Break and a Brand New Rival! - Spoiler:
Salamander took a leave out of the market and walked infront of the gates that lead into the Marine Prison.
'Pyro Pyro no Mi... Flame Arrow.' The arrow melted the gates and sent them flying, catching the attention of
a few marines. " Halt! You can't be in here! " yelled one of the marines. They took out their guns and cocked
it while aiming at Salamander. " Please don't waste my time, I need to rescue a friend. " Salamander released
fire and shaped it into a gun and then shot all the marines. " I need a worthy opponent. " Salamander then
walked underground to the prison cells. There he looked around at all the cells until he found who he was
looking for. " I'm suprised you didn't escape, it looks rather easy. " said Salamander. " The bars are made
of seastone, and besides, they took my Katanas. " replied the man. " Lightning, your dissapointing now. "
Salamander extended his hands and let out a blast of fire, breaking the bars. Lightning stepped out and
thanked Salamander. " Ok, now we need to look for my katanas " said Lightning. Lightning placed his hand
on the floor. 'Jolt Jolt no Mi... Vicible!' A string of lightning ran through the floor of the jail and then
spread all around the building. Lightning closed his eyes for a second. The sparks then vanished and so did
Lightning. In a flash clap of thunder, Lightning came back with two Katanas in his hand. " Now let's head out
of here. " said Salamander. They travelled through the hole in the wall and into the Marine Training field.
A black orb burst out of no where and Lightning sliced it in half. " What was that?! " asked Lightning.
'Zuki Zuki no Mi...' a voice whispered from somewhere. Salamander and Lightning looked around to see
where it came from. A Shadow arose from the ground and aimed a hand at the turned Salamander. 'Shadow Blast!'
A stream of Shadow burst out and was blocked by Lightning. 'Jolt Jolt no Mi Electric Barrier!' A shield-like
electric form blocked the shot from advancing. 'Zuki Zuki no Mi... Model Wolf!' The figure turned in a wolf
and scratched Lightning, but was unaffected. " A Zoan AND a Logia devil fruit? " wondered Salamander. " Not
only that, I have the Paramecia ability to corrupt your mind with shadows. I have all the three devil fruit
abilities at my disposile. " replied the figure. Salamander was baffled, he had the power of 3 devil fruits
all in one. " Lightning! Let's hit him with our best shot! " yelled Salamander. Lightning nodded and dashd
around the figure drawing a circle and then a star inside, the figure in the middle. Salamander picked up
a huge boulder from the ground and started heating it up. The figure tried to move, but was trapped by a
secret electric current that kept him from moving. " Now, for my special end move. " Lightning aimed his
two open hands at the figure and electricity started flowing all around. 'Jolt Jolt no Mi...' Salamander
propelled in the air with the heated rock and fire flew right behind him as a boost. '...12 Paragram Jolt!'
A huge ammount of voltage started flying inside the paragram and lightning pierced throughout the whole
place. Salamander stopped in mid-air, and turned around. 'Logia Combo... Pyro Jolt no Mi...' Salamander's
body was wrapped in lightning as he was about to go down. 'Comet Crash!' Salamander used the bit Jolt logia
Lightning transfered to move at Lightning speed and slam the Meteor-like rock on the Pierced Figure. Before
it hit, a huge orb of darkness surrounded the area and everything in it started disintegrating. Salamander
grabbed Lightning and escaped from the huge orb. They watched as everything inside it became dust. The orb
was sent back and the figure in the middle. He seemed injured, but still willing to fight. " We'll meet again
someday, I'm too tired to fight any longer. " said the figure. He turned back and disspeared in a portal of
darkness. A voice rang in Salamander's head... " My name is Tatsuo. " Exhausted, the Pirate Captain and
Lightning went to the harbor and inside the boat. There they set out to see while both taking a nap. What
they seek next; A marksman and a better ship.
Chapter 3 : Duel on Mt. XIII - Spoiler:
As the boat that took the two crew members neared its destination, they saw a group of pirates stealing
treasure from the mountain. The pirates got to the bottom and saw the small ship. " Haha, two novice pirates
in the middle of no where? Big Mistake! " said the Captain of the pirates. " Go and check out their ship, and
kill them if they have nothing. " ordered the Captain. A group of 10 walked over and looked around, no
treasure. They smiled and lifted up their swords. They slashed Salamander and Lightning, but to no effect.
Lightning turned into Electricity and Salamander into fire, both sleeping while the pirates kept slashing.
" Why won't they DIE! " yelled the pirates. The captain saw they took a rather long time, so he walked over
their and saw them. " What're you idiots doing?! " yelled the Captain. " Well Captain, we tried slashing these
pirates but they don't seem to be affected! " The captain grabbed his spear and jabbed at Salamander. No
effect. The captain smiled. He then jabbed Lightning, no effect. The captain burst into laughter. " Well, it
seems we have not one, but TWO logia devil fruit users! " cried the Captain. He then produced a white aura
and proceeded to Jab Salamander. Salamander turned over in his sleep and the ship was slashed. Water sprayed
on both and they woke up. " What happend?! " screamed Lightning. Salamander looked at the captain and his
crew. " I believe we were trying to be killed. " responded Salamander. Lightning extended his finger and
zapped all of the crew mates. The captain stood strong. " Nice, you seem to be rather strong. Allow me to
introduce myself, I am Haki. Leader of the Debuu Pirates. " Salamander glared at him, and stepped back. " You
Don't mean... " Salamander stopped. " Yes, along with Zaki and Waki, we are the three that make up the Threat
of the East Blue. " laughed Haki. Salamander smiled. " Now here's a challenge. " Lightning nodded in agreement.
Haki pointed to the top of the mountain. " How about this, we duel, 2 on 1, on the top of Mt. XIII. " said
Haki. Salamander was amazed, 2 on 1. " Thats kinda of an overkill, we kick too much ass. " laughed Lightning.
Haki smiled. " So it's settled? I'll meet you on the top. " and Haki took his leave. " The Threat of the East
Blue... a bounty of $10,000,000 and a combined 20,000,000. " whispered Salamander. He then smiled and put
his hands down. " Let's go, to fight! " Salamander yelled and then propelled into the air. Lightning moved
at extreme speeds on the summit. Both stood there, and Haki came. " Ok, it's gonna be a 2 on 1 match. " said
Haki raising his Spear. Salamander looked at Lightning, and Lightning at Salamander. " Start! " screamed Haki
moving and trying to Jab Salamander. " His speed! It's amazing! " Salamander stopped the tip of the spear and
kicked Salamander, Lightning came in and slashed him twice. Haki grabbed Lightning and then let go. Lightning
fell to the floor, weakened. Haki started laughing. Salamander spoke up " What the hell did you do to Lightning?! "
" I sucked Half of his Devil Fruit powers! " said Haki shooting a bolt of electricity at Salamander, then
jabbing his spear into Lightning. " How did the spear go through?! " Salamander wondered. " Well, it went through
because as my name implies, I am a Haki user, I can predict movements and hit Logia users. " responded Haki.
He then punched Salamander in the stomach and sucked in his Devil Fruit powers. " But you will be happy to know
know that after I leave, your powers will be back. " said Haki to make it seem okay The two lay on the floor,
both getting up. 'Pyro Pyro no Mi... Flame Arrow!' Haki blocked it with his spear. 'Jolt Jolt no Mi 10,000 Voltage!'
Haki was shocked with a Ten Thousand bolt and Salamander extended his hand. 'Pyro Pyro no Mi... Flare Eye!'
Rings of fire shot out of Salamander's hand and pushed him back. Haki immediatly stood up and slashed repedetly
slashed Salamander. He then placed his hand onto his chest. 'Boom!' Salamander was sent hurtling back and Haki
turned to Lightning. 'Pyro Pyro no Mi... Flare Eye!' Lightning dodged and grabbed Haki. " Salamander! Get him! "
Salamander stood up and turned both of his arms to Haki. 'Pyro Pyro no Mi... Phoenix Assault!' A phoenix shaped
flame came and swept through Haki. Haki grabbed his spear and hit Lightning and threw him at the phoenix.
He then stabbed Salamander. " I must take my leave now. " Haki raised both hands and murmured 'Jolt Jolt no Mi...
10,000 Voltage!' he Zapped everyone on the summit and then disseapeared using the Jolt Jolt Fruit's Lightning
speed power. Salamander and Lightning lay on the ground, defeated.
Chapter 4 : One Bullet can Pierce the World - Spoiler:
A bit soon after the battle, Salamander and Lightning recovered half of their stolen powers. They used it to
stand up and regain energy. " That battle... was intense " said Lightning gasping for air. " We need to recruit
someone to our team. " suggested Salamander. Lightning nodded in agreement. They both stood up and looked at
a distance. " Lightning, use your powers to hear if bullets are being shot anywhere. " Lightning put his hand
on the floor. 'Jolt Jolt no Mi Vicible!' Lightning waited as he lines of electricity picked up noises. They
stopped flowing and Lightning grabbed onto Salamander and used his Lightning speed to warp to the location.
There was an average gunsman training at a range. " Yo! Shoot me. " yelled Salamander. " W-what? " replied
the gunsman. Salamander looked at Lightning then stepped back. " Sorry for troubling you. " said Salamander.
Lightning did the process about 13 times before stopping. " Salamander, this is useless! We've been to almost
every island in the East Blue searching for this guy! " said Lightning. Salamander sat on a nearby rock, and
took a deep breathe. As Salamander was finishing his breathe, a Blue substance shaped like a bullet hurled
through his eyes and away from him. He looked at the path with all the trees blasted away, and a figure at
the end. " My name is Aura, I ate the Tama Tama no Mi and I can control people's souls and embed my soul to
other objects. " said Aura. He then extended his hand at both of the pirates, and crushed them. They stood
in pain. 'Tama Tama no Mi... Soul Rejection!' Lightning and Salamander's body was hurled inwards and blue
substance started pouring out of their mouths. Salamander smiled and extended his hand at Aura. 'Pyro...
Pyro... no Mi... Flame Arrow!' Aura dropped his fists and dodged the attack while Lightning and Salamander
started gasping for air. " Nice moves, but we're not here to fight. We want to recruit someone into our pirate
crew. " explained Salamander. " Pirates, Huh? My dad was a pirate. I'd love to join, I just wanna see what
you've guys got. " said Aura. Salamander and Lightning smiled. " Use your strongest move, I can evaluate how
much power you're exerting with my powers. " said Aura. " I'll go first. " said Lightning. He looked toward
the open sea and focused his power. " This is my special move, it makes me overlimit my power by 12. " said
Lightning with a bit of static overpouring. 'Jolt Jolt no Mi...' Salamander and Aura watched as Lightning
started gathering weather clouds around him. '12 Paragram Jolt!' Lightning outpoured a huge ammount of electricity
that roared through the skys and shocked the seas and the land around it. Aura's eyes widened, as he has not
seen so much power exerted at once. " You exerted over 50 million watts of electricity at once, at 1200% power.
Salamander chuckled. " What, not strong enough? " said Lightning. " Not for 12x your original power. " Salamander
stepped up and extended both of his hands. " You might wanna get back, this is gonna be a tough one. " Lightning
and aura stepped back as heat started shooting out of Salamander's hand. 'Pyro Pyro no Mi... Phoenix Asgard!'
Lightning and Aura stood their ground as wind started hurtling back and an immense amount of fire shot out
of Salamander's hands creating a Phoenix shaped flame larger than the island itself and shooting fireballs
down and burning everything in sight. Soon after, the flame died out and Salamander fell to his knees. " Your
results are... Impossible... " Aura tried to reanaylze it but then he sighed and spoke up. " You reached a
temperature of over 400,000 Degrees and at just... 60% power... " said Aura. Salamander started breathing
heavily as he later stood up and walked to Aura. Aura looked up at Salamander and Lightning. " How can two
people be so... strong? " said Aura. " It depends, on how you look at strong. " said Salamander. " You see,
my grandpa was strong... but... " Salamander laid his head down. " What he's trying to say, Aura, is that
strong can be seperated into many different qualities, not just psycical strength, also mentally and how people
handle a situation. " Aura's eyes turned another shade. " Then I will join your crew, to seek out true strength,
not Psysical nor mental, not even spiritual, I'll seek out all the strengths and blend them to perfection. "
said Aura, with a determined face. Lightning and Salamander smiled, looking over at Aura. " 1 day from now, we
will challenge the Debuu pirates, and beat them. " said Salamander with his fists curled up. Lightning nodded
and took out both his Katanas. As well did Aura, taking out his two guns. Salamander looked over at the direction
that Haki went over too, then smirked as he turned away.
Chapter 5 : Six Devil Fruit Clash?! - Spoiler:
Salamander stood at the top of the cliff where the ocean hit the shores on the island, rested from yesterday's
training. Lightning and Aura quickly joined him, as the sun was rising. " Today's the day... " said Aura.
Salamander nodded and looked over at Lightning. " Today we get our rematch from Haki. " said Salamander.
Lightning looked over the shores then nodded. Salamander stood up, followed by Aura and Lightning while they
go and gathered there gear. " Lightning, you mind doing the honors? " asked Salamander. Lightning put his
hand down and traced where the Debuu Pirates may be. He stopped, then grabbed Salamander and Aura. " Let's go
kick some Pirate ass. " Lightning shot down and warped the trio to the Debuu Pirate's Ship. The crew quickly
took notice. " What are you guys doing here?! " Salamander started shooting fire at the crew and Aura shot
them while Lightning slashed them with his katanas. Soon the door opened and three people stepped out. The
trio stopped fighting the crew and paid their attention over there. Haki laughed imediatly followed by clapping
his hands. " You managed to beat my whole crew, and recruit what seems to be a new team mate! " laughed Haki.
" What seems to be? " said Aura. He took out his two guns and shot Haki right after. Haki stopped the aura
with his hand and sucked it in. " The power of the Kyu Kyu no Mi... it allows me to absorb Half the power of
a devil fruit until I am defeated or leave a specific area. " said Haki bouncing off aura at him. One of the
two behind him also stepped up. " My name is Zaki, I own the Kyo Kyo no Mi and I have gained ungodly strength
and I can even DESTROY mountains by punching hard in its direction. " Zaki smiled. " From 100 Feet away. " said
Zaki as The Trio was pretty suprised at the strength. The last one behind him spoke up too. " My name is Waki
and I own the Haya Haya no Mi, which allows me to surpass the speed of even Lightning. " said Waki while Lightning
smiled. Haki started laughing heavily. " Well, why don't you look at that! A six devil fruit clash! " Salamander
pointed a finger at Haki. " Us 3, against you three. Lightning will go against Waki, and Aura against Zaki. "
said Salamander with strong determination. " Me and you don't fight until the end, Hothead. " said Haki with
a smile. Salamander agreed and watched to see who went first. Zaki stood up and readied his fists. " You, Gunner,
you will go against me. " said Zaki. " Of course, but It's kind of an overkill. " said Aura while pointing both
his pistols at Zaki. Lightning and Salamander sat down and so did Waki and Haki. Zaki jumped at Aura, and Aura
at Zaki, both with determination to win.
Chapter 6 : Aura vs. Zaki - Spoiler:
Zaki attempted the first strike by trying to hit Aura, but was blocked and kicked to the floor. Zaki stood up
immediatly and stood back from Aura. He smiled, then threw a punch in Aura's direction making the wind whirl
up and blow him back. 'Tama Tama no Mi... Hook Line!' A hook-line figure made out of Aura's soul grabbed onto
the Ship's rail and he started going. Zaki readed his fist for when he came back. When Aura neared the end, he
frontflipped into Zaki's shoulder and jumped off, in mid-air turning around and shooting him. Zaki tanked most
of the hits, then turned around to punch Aura, which the wind then again hurled sending Aura flying. Aura did
the same tactic and Zaki stepped foward. " Is this guy an idiot... " said Lightning. Haki laughed. When Aura
neared, Zaki stepped back and Aura front-flipped landing right infront of Zaki. 'Kyo Kyo no Mi... Insant Boom!'
Zaki pulled back his right hand, and hit Aura in the stomach with full force, stopping his motion and making
blood spill from his mouth. Haki laughed as Aura started bleeding, and Salamander stood watching. Zaki turned
back at the bleeding Aura. Aura was motionless, it seemed like a win. Haki stopped laughing and proceeded to
speak when Aura extended his hand. Zaki started yelping in pain as Aura started damaging his soul. 'Tama Tama
no Mi... Soul Crush!' Aura closed his hands and soon Zaki's eyes blanked out. Aura managed to stand up and
pull out his guns. 'Tama Tama no Mi...' said Aura with Zaki turning around and uppercutting him, sending him
flying in the air. Aura seemed to be hurt alot, and could not move in mid-air. As he feel down Zaki was ready
for a final blow. As Aura neared the ground, Zaki released his hand. 'Kyo Kyo no Mi... Instant Balista!' Zaki's
hand swung upward at amazing speed stopping Aura right there, and falling on the floor, bleeding even more than
before. Haki started laughing even more at the collapsed Aura, who seemed to have lost conscious. As Zaki walked
away, Aura grabbed onto his foot. " Y-Y-You... " said the nearly-dying Aura. " You have... a flaw... " said Aura
amazingly staring to stand up. " Your strength is great... " said a now stood-up Aura. " But you lack.. Heart
and soul... " said Aura extending both his guns. " Well then, prove it. I'll use my Kyo Kyo no Mi powers to
enhance my strength and tank the most strong shots. I'll give you one free hit. " Aura looked over at Salamander
and Lightning, then back at Zaki. " As you wish. " Aura stood there as his Soul started flowing around him.
His guns were then enrapped in Soul and his body was too. The floor was getting filled the waves of Aura now
appearing alot. Aura stood up, his eyes changed, they turned a bright blue and started giving off soul. " This
is what happens when you don't have a balance of all strengths. " He cocked his guns and then took a better aim
at Zaki. 'Tama Tama no Mi...' The soul around Aura started flowing even more, and started flowing faster as well.
Everyone waited in anticipation at what he was gonna do. " I'll show you why you can't only focus on one strength! "
said Aura with his eyes now red, and the Aura changed to red too. " I'll show you the true excess of my power. "
'Kyo Kyo no Mi, Iron Body!' Zaki's body started hardening and was ready to tank hits. " Hardening you're body
won't help you... " said Aura. 'Tama Tama no Mi...' The red aura built up at the tip of his guns. 'Tama Tama no Mi...
CRIMSON DEVOUR!' An IMMENSE amount of red aura shot out of Aura's gun scorching and hurting Zaki as he stood
there, knocked out when it hit. After time, he was sent backwards into the sea a great distance after the shot
went even farther. The soul ran out, and Aura put his guns down. " Hardening you're body won't help you... because
I waesn't aiming at your Physical form, but you're spiritual, which was not trained and extremely vulnerable.
Aura fell down near Salamander and Lightning, taking a nap from the energy he exhausted. Haki had a serious face,
he wasen't too happy. " Waki went after Zaki and recovered his body, bringing him to the ship. Haki finnaly
started talking. " Next is Waki and the swordsman. " followed by a cough. Lightning stood up and so did Waki.
" You specialize in speed, huh? " said Lightning. " Yeah, and you in Lightning? " Lightning nodded, taking
out his two swords.
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