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PostSubject: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:32 pm

Sin Cleanser is a poem that is based on my train of thoughts that keeps running in my head every day. Please do not copy\post on any other site without permission.

Everything aroud me,
Feels like it's fading,
My heart rotting,
My mind decaying.

What purpose did I hold,
For what I have done,
I am losing sanity,
Turning insane.

As my tears dry down,
I lay down pretending,
That peace still held,
In my disturbed soul.

Inevitable was reality,
My pretending self satisfaction,
I now close my eyes to rest,
And to not wake up ever again.

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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:40 pm

NICE ONE BASIL! I love it!!! Is that one you were talkin about?
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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:42 pm

Nah, the other one I was talking about was Life. Still unsure about posting it here.... Anyways, thanks bro~ =w= BTW, check the first post for a wallpaper pf Sin Cleanser.

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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:06 pm

Dude. that was...quite nice, but depressing. One would think it were my thoughts...at any rate, nice poem.

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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:39 pm

Thanks, and no stealing my thoughts >.> I should write happy poems, just so that the reader doesn't have suicidal tendencies....

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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:52 pm

llol...probably...maybe...i dunno

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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:46 pm

I've put up a video of Sin Cleanser in the first post. Please do check it out and comment~

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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:15 pm

just watched the vid. its epic. *thumbs up*

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PostSubject: Re: Sin Cleanser - Poem   Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:16 pm

Thanks bro >w< I really really appreciate the comment~

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